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[iowa61]

well i'm for starting over.how about giving me another chance.i recently won an award for this poem.would like for all of you to read it.

i woke up the other day
there wasnt much for me to say
you left the door open wide
i felt the cold from inside
it was your final goodbye
i could only ask why
i looked deeply into my heart
now so torn apart
i held you so close to me
no you dont want to be
you have found some one new
you said we were through
it hurts like hell
maybe its just as well
i cant force you to stay
love doesnt work that way
i will go on some how
i just dont know right now.

melissa

[musicfreak]

Hmmm...Dunno if anyone´s interested in my opinion but I´ll post it anyway.

Melissa I have to say, I really LOVE your poem. No wonder you won an award for it. hehe.
Where can I get to read your stuff???

[Buttons]

I really like your poem...

[luvz_ellen]

I like it and loved it! And I do agree,no wonder you won.I hope I can read all the poems you've made,i love poems.Hope I can be you're friend..