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Ellenfreak
12-30-2004, 07:41 PM
I love you, and don't know why..
This feeling is taking me over. I can't think straight, I can't do anything without you standing there by me. You're so beautiful the way the wind blows through you hair makes me feel like "I'm in heaven".
Everything about you is so perfect to me.
When you look at me with your big beautiful brown eye's I go weak in the knee's, I lose all words, and I melt…
Your skin and lips are so beautiful and soft. Just makes me want to kiss you all over and make love to you as if it were the very first time.
You are my number one, you are my heart and soul. Life has no meaning without you here by my side.
I only have one question for you. Do you love me the same or will there ever be anything with us that I can believe in?
My heart is filled with so much love for you, and I want to share it with you.
Life is too short to live alone, I don't want to be alone anymore. I want to love you forever..
mom_of_12
12-30-2004, 08:02 PM
Regardless of whom that was aimed toward, it was a beautiful sentiment" :)
Ellenfreak
12-30-2004, 08:09 PM
IT WASN'T REALLY AIMED AT NO-ONE, JUST ALITTLE POEM I WROTE MONTHS AGO..
THANKS :wink:
haokan
12-30-2004, 08:21 PM
oooooooooooh!!! :cry: this is so sweet and at the same time so sad, just as if there is so much love in the air and the one you want to share it with it nowhere around.
Love is such a strong feeling, it hurts even when you have someone to share it with. It's like too much.
`my heart fills up like a balloon that's about to burst. And then I remember to relax, and not try to hold on to it. And then it flows through me like rain. And I can't feel anything but gratitude for every single moment of my stupid little life.`
Anyway i love your poem!! :oops:
Ellenfreak
12-30-2004, 08:45 PM
THANKS! :wink:
mascalzone
12-30-2004, 09:55 PM
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indecisive
12-31-2004, 04:23 AM
love your poem as well. it's great and i can't wait reading some more poems from you... :D
a_true_dory
01-05-2005, 03:22 PM
OH MY! SO BEAUTIFUL! i am a little willie and a limerick writer >.< i'm good at it, and they are so funny. i want to be a comedian, and many people say i should be... not by my limericks or little willie things, but because i come up with the most funniest things ever! well, thats what they tell me, im just being me O.o
Ellenfreak
01-05-2005, 04:23 PM
Well thank-you, and good luck on that...I have lots more, just haven't put them up yet to share with everyone.
walkerrose
01-05-2005, 04:24 PM
lovely poem
you should post some more
laura123
01-05-2005, 04:53 PM
it's a great poem and i'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
Ellenfreak
01-05-2005, 05:02 PM
Thanks I will try to get some more up sometime this week..
backflipperbabe
01-05-2005, 09:20 PM
I love you, and don't know why..
This feeling is taking me over. I can't think straight, I can't do anything without you standing there by me. You're so beautiful the way the wind blows through you hair makes me feel like "I'm in heaven".
Everything about you is so perfect to me.
When you look at me with your big beautiful brown eye's I go weak in the knee's, I lose all words, and I melt…
Your skin and lips are so beautiful and soft. Just makes me want to kiss you all over and make love to you as if it were the very first time.
You are my number one, you are my heart and soul. Life has no meaning without you here by my side.
I only have one question for you. Do you love me the same or will there ever be anything with us that I can believe in?
My heart is filled with so much love for you, and I want to share it with you.
Life is too short to live alone, I don't want to be alone anymore. I want to love you forever..
That was a great poem i love to write poems but mine arnt that good.
Ellenfreak
01-05-2005, 09:21 PM
hey thanks backflipperbabe...
backflipperbabe
01-05-2005, 09:23 PM
your welcome. what is ur insperation?
Ellenfreak
01-05-2005, 09:25 PM
I just write out my feelings for someone, or something....
backflipperbabe
01-05-2005, 09:32 PM
yeah i do that some times but i mostly write about things that i like like gymnastics or frogs some times fellings.
Ellenfreak
01-05-2005, 09:34 PM
That's a good start, so when u get older...u can really write ur feelings down for someone u like or love. :lol:
thora109
01-05-2005, 10:18 PM
I love you, and don't know why..
This feeling is taking me over. I can't think straight, I can't do anything without you standing there by me. You're so beautiful the way the wind blows through you hair makes me feel like "I'm in heaven".
Everything about you is so perfect to me.
When you look at me with your big beautiful brown eye's I go weak in the knee's, I lose all words, and I melt…
Your skin and lips are so beautiful and soft. Just makes me want to kiss you all over and make love to you as if it were the very first time.
You are my number one, you are my heart and soul. Life has no meaning without you here by my side.
I only have one question for you. Do you love me the same or will there ever be anything with us that I can believe in?
My heart is filled with so much love for you, and I want to share it with you.
Life is too short to live alone, I don't want to be alone anymore. I want to love you forever..
love that poem Ellenfreak :mrgreen: 8)
backflipperbabe
01-05-2005, 10:58 PM
its great ant it
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